Reflection
Hello, everyone! If you can remember what I post before three weeks, you might know what I am going to write about. Today , I am trying to reflect on how well I achieve my goals, and any other revisions that I need to make. I wish you enjoy it!
My first goal was to get many green cards in GLPS(Global Leadership Program for Students). Fortunately, I personally think that I did a great job on this goal. I do not have many yellow cards or red cards. Exactly, I have eleven green cards, one yellow card, and no red card. I listen carefully and been nice to the teachers. Also, I never fought or steal something with my friends in GLPS. I have four days left until this camp finishes. I wish that I could get a prize being a great behavior during one month in camp.
My second goal is to get more knowledgeable. I think that I also achieve this goal. I personally wanted to achieve the first goal the best. I had to listen to teachers carefully to achieve this goal. Fortunately, as I listen to teachers carefully, I naturally became more knowledgeable. I now knew some other words that I did not know. Also, I know how to post a blog, many informations about Roman, and how to debate well.
My third goal was to be successful in pop song contest. I think I almost succeeded that goal too. Our classmates did the best doing the pop song contest. We sang a song called 'Everything about You'. It was very fun and exciting to do the pop song contest. We said to ourselves that we did a great job and happily finished to contest.
I want to add one more goal to my original goals. I want to success having lots of leaderships! I had some leaderships when I became the president in Ken-do class and during the pop song contest. However, I want to have more leaderships. I wish that I could have 100% of leaderships and go back to my home!
These are the goals that I reflect and added. I wish that I can achieve the added goal, which is having a great leadership. Thank you for reading my reflection of my goals!
These are the goals that I reflect and added. I wish that I can achieve the added goal, which is having a great leadership. Thank you for reading my reflection of my goals!
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ReplyDeleteI am very impressed of what you have done in camp. 11 green cards and 1 yellow card! That is very impressive :) You have done a great job! Although I did not have enough time to review all the blogs you have uploaded, I can definitely say that you are a brilliant writer. When I read your creative story "mysterious land", I was, as I commented on your blog, mesmerized with your imagination and your scientific knowledge. :) I eagerly waited your posts every time, and none of them has every disappointed me.
ReplyDeleteWhat you can improve from now on is to focus on minor errors on word choice. You sometimes use words that are not appropriate in sentences. For example, in this post, you have used "I think I almost success at that goal too." You need to change success into succeeded. (You are writing this essay in past tense.) In order to improve your ability to choose adequate words, you need to read several books. I would like to recommend you to read "Newberry Awards" books, books which have received critical response from several authors and readers. Such books include "The Giver", "Charlotte's Web", and "A girl named Disaster".
Hope you enjoy your summer :). If you have any questions, feel free to contact me through facebook. You will be able to find my account by searching "Sun Woo James Park".
^^ Thank you for the criticism.
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