Creative Writing
The Mysterious Land
It was a year of 4832 where many lands appeared. There was a boy named Henry. He lives with his father and mother. One day, Henry found an atlas on his favorite book, The Undiscovered Lands. In the map, there was a small island on the center of the Pacific Ocean. In the legend, it said that if you go inside the waterspout in the center of the Pacific Ocean, you will go to that island. Henry was very curious and interested. He wanted to go to that island.
He talked with his parents, but his parents kept on saying no. However, with Henry's great convince, his parents said yes. His father, Smith said that he will go with him for the safety. They went to rent a boat and started to go ahead to the center of the Pacific Ocean.
After few hours later, they saw a small thing in front of them. They were very curious, and went toward that small thing. The 'small thing' started to look bigger and bigger, and bigger. They recognized that it was a waterspout! The wind started to blow harder, and the wave started to come faster. The boat started to crash and the emergency bell rang! They did not think about anything
and jump toward the waterspout! They open their eyes after few seconds. They saw a beautiful land in front of them. It was a mysterious island! They were very happy and started to make many things. They cut the trees and made a tree house. They also brought some sharp rocks and cut the fruits and plants.
One day, when Henry was walking around to find rocks, he saw something glittering thing buried inside the ground. He dig that thing, and recognized that it was a book.The title was The Island of the Pacific Ocean. He read he book for a hour. However, he was really surprised. There was a writing that said, "The zombies are going to come out on Winter. WATCH OUT." There were only six days left until the Winter comes. His father and he started to make swords and a bomb for their protections. Making those things took five days! What are they going to do?
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I enjoyed reading your story. The final version of your story is much better than what you had showed to me for the first time. You have well elaborated the setting and the conflict. Great Job :)
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